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Mia and Emma are best friends. They always go to school together, always sit together, always eat together and always do their homework together. Their friendship was very strong. But, in their class there were very jealous and bad girls who wanted to be friends with them. But, Mia and Emma’s friendship was very strong. And, in their free time, they would visit each other and would never QUARREL like the bad guys. While, the bad guys would quarrel with each other. But one day, something unexpected happened...When Emma was waiting at Mulberry street, for her friend, mia, she couldn’t find her anywhere.She looked and looked but couldn’t find her. So, sadly she went to school on her own, without mia. Then, when she had reached school, she was astonished! She saw her best friend Mia sitting with Wanda, who was the most spoilt girl in the class. She couldn’t believe it! But she knew that Wanda forced Mia to become her friend, because both she and Mia, didn’t like to do friendship with girls like that… But she didn’t care, the only thing she cared was to make Wanda understand that they don’t want to be friends with her. So, right after finishing some periods, the class got a break. In that break, Emma decided she’ll stand up to Wanda, and speak with her, and get her BFF, Mia, back! But, firstly, she needed to be very brave to Wanda. (which she already was) So, then she reached where Wanda was sitting with Mia, and said,”Wanda, why did you take Mia away with you, without even permission???” Wanda firstly ignored her, but then said, “See, Mia is MY best friend now, BECAUSE I need her, and you don’t, and so Mia will be MY friend from now, and she’ll never sit with you again, Muahahahaha!!!” With this, Emma really began to feel very angry, but didn’t say anything. She tried to calm herself down and think of a really good solution which could help end this up. So she said, “So, Wanda, let’s play a game which can ACTUALLY decide who is Mia’s true friend, so let’s start?” Then, Wanda said, “ Ok, YES I’m totally ready for this game, but how are we gonna play it??” So then, Emma explained, “This is gonna be a quiz, where Mia will ask questions and we need to answer it as quickly as we can, in 5 seconds. So, are you ready for the quiz?” Then, Wanda courageously said, “YEAH, I’m completely READY.” “So let’s start.” said Emma. Then, Mia said, ”Question 1, what is my favorite food? Five, four, Three, Two, one and zero.” As soon as she had hardly said ‘one’, Emma uttered out, ‘hotdogs’ which was actually Mia’s favorite food, while Wanda spent the whole time thinking and thinking. After that, Mia called out the second question as, “Question 2, which is my favorite color? And then Emma uttered out the correct answer which was ‘blue and pink.’ And Wanda could not answer it. So, like this Mia asked questions and Emma solved those in no time, and so it was found out who Mia's best friend was. Then, Emma exclaimed out loud, “See Wanda. I won in the quiz, which proves that I’m Mia’s best friend and not you.” With that, Wanda’s face became red with anger and jealousy and shouted, “THIS IS CHEATING!!!!” Emma said, “No, Wanda, it is NOT cheating. This quiz proves that me and Mia are best friends. Then, wanda went away, furiously without saying anything. After that, Mia and Emma were so happy as they were BFFS again!!!IS THIS CORRECT?

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The story is cool, I LOVED it, and I copied it ad going to send it to my BFF.

Well there are some MISTAKES I spotted  -

  1. It's not 'Muahahahaha' It should be 'Mwahahahaha' or it will not be pronounced properly.
  2. Well, you didn't gave ( " " ) [ Double INVERTED Commas ] after, "No, Wanda, it is NOT cheating. "
  3. And there are capital letters where there are not supposed to be, They are =
  • QUARREL
  • BECAUSE
  • ACTUALLY
  • YES
  • YEAH
  • READY
  • THIS IS CHEATING
  • NOT

      4. I know you used them where a PERSON uses her voice strongly and            

          effectively.  

      5. It's Ok if you write BFF in capital, but at last, it should not be " BFFS"      

           it should be " BFFs "                                      



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