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B. Rewrite this story, changing the long sentences, to shorter ones, whereverappropriate, to improve the feeling of action.I was strolling along on the way to home, stopping often to look for butterflies onthe plants along the footpath and to pick up interesting stones and feathers, whenall at once the sky darkened. I looked up and saw huge black clouds moving quicklyfrom the hills down towards the city.I quickened my pace and I felt the rain begin to fall, lightly at first and then heavierand heavier, so I began to run fast as I didn't want to get wet. The rain continuedto fall harder and harder and before I could reach home, my hair and clothes werewet through. |
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